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Edge, Chapter Eleven: Rank Up

Jenna from Edge by Tori Hamlin

Every moment of Jenna’s life just seemed to grow stranger. An hour after submitting a video of herself sucking off a stranger, a message appeared in her Haloes stating, “Submission approved. Challenge complete!”

She watched a little reward chest appear in the corner of her right eye, which she tapped, and a little explosion of color erupted as her rewards filled the screen. The money was deposited to her account. Her rank increased to one, which startled her as a triumphant horn sounded in her earbud, and then a Universal Key was added to her inventory with a 48-hour duration. For the first time since this whole business began, she felt an exultant thrill. She’d done it!

She swiped open her inventory and took the key in her hand, watching it glow golden in her fingers. The key, though, was a virtual object. Her belt was a physical thing. Even as she wondered what she was supposed to do to unlock the belt, the options appeared in her vision.

“Apply Key to Self,” read the first, while the second read, “Return to Inventory,” and a third offered, “Transfer to Another Player.”

Jenna paused, remembering Kara’s words. It’s its own kind of torture. Her heart sank, thinking of Kara and her challenge, the pain and the torture she’d endured for a long week. She sighed and returned the key to her inventory. No. She wouldn’t use the key for herself. Kara deserved it. She’d never have been able to complete the challenge without her, she knew. Kara’s solution had proven the easy way to do it. Kara had saved her, again.

Jenna swiped away the inventory screen and brought up the list of newly unlocked challenges befitting her new rank. She’d given a lot of thought to the weird life she was now stuck in. There were great rewards out there for players who complied, and the more she progressed, the greater freedom over her own destiny she’d obtain. Having successfully sucked off her first boy, too, and then having been anally dominated by her keyholder had taught her things about herself, as well.

Perhaps it was only the influence of the belt and the Obsequium, but the rush of sexual excitement from taking that strange cock in her mouth, using her inexperienced tongue and lips to pleasure it, until it fed her a gooey reward, had been exciting and pleasurable for her, too. Then, surrendering herself to Kara, hearing the filthy words out of her mouth as she made her cum from her ass was, even now, making her pussy ache for attention. Of course, her pussy was always aching for attention these days, so perhaps it was the fog of arousal that was constantly with her which was making her enjoy these things. In either circumstance, it wasn’t going to change, so there were only two choices. Fight and lose or capitulate and be rewarded.

The introductory challenges were now gray and locked, no longer valid for someone of her rank. The new challenges, she saw, were similar but a step up in what they required, forcing her to choose something that would push her just a bit further from her comfort zone. As though she’d ever considered performing sexual acts on strangers within her comfort zone, she thought. She scrolled through.


Switch Hitter: Submit a Halo recording of yourself providing oral satisfaction to another player of the same gender. Target can be someone known to you. Oral satisfaction can be achieved from any part of the body, as long as the target experiences orgasm.

Reward choices:

-Cash prize of $1,500

-Level 2 item choice

Bonus chance: Provide satisfaction to a player previously unknown to you.

Bonus reward: $500

Result of failure: 24 hours with Cum Bucket designation. Geolocation active. Available to all players.

Consolation prize: $100


She now knew that multiple challenges could be taken at once, and if she chose wisely, she could actually fulfill different aspects of them while doing others. She added the Switch Hitter challenge to her queue. That was an easy one. Kara would certainly let her go down on her after she completed her own challenge, and Jenna had to admit that she was very curious to see what it would be like to repay her keyholder for the many orgasms she’d allowed her recently.

She read down the list, which contained some of the same types of challenges as the initial rank, including self-imposed chastity or self-denial in front of an audience. Those she shied away from, but she did need something else that would get her rank up.


Spread the Love: Submit a Halo recording of yourself engaging in penetrative sexual congress with a person of the opposite gender. Target can be known to you. Oral sex does not fulfill challenge requirements. Orgasm for one or both parties must be achieved for challenge completion.

Reward choices:

-Cash prize of $2,000

-48 hours freedom

Bonus chance: If the target is unknown to you, Rank up.

Result of failure: 24 hours with Free Use designation. Geo-location active. Available to all players.

Consolation prize: $100