It's a rare story that has both this much hot sex *and* interesting character arcs that come to a satisfying conclusion. When erotic stories *do* have strong themes, I often find the endings rather rushed, once the author reaches the thematic, er, climax. I really appreciated having a final "celebratory" sequence that detailed the happy status quo in all its depravity :-)
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I really appreciate the feedback and comment. Since this is the story that started my publishing, it's got a really special place in my dark heart. Obviously, since I publish under Tori's name. It will be nice to go back to those characters again and conclude the DomCo series in 2023. I just hope I can do it justice. I feel like I've come a long way with my writing since then. Fingers crossed.